So this is what i been looking forward to. same thing as paradox but with a few different rules.

there is a main story. u can write ur own dialogue. u can do more than one page in a row. u can collaberate on a page with someone else.
anyway i havent finishe the pages, some are black and white and will color soon. just thought i post them up

http://www.mojosapiens.com/paradox_space.html
http://www.mojosapiens.com/pics/paradox_space1.html

Will color these soon.

Awesome man! really. It had been ages since you posted something nex, I almost forgot how good you were :p.
I love the attention to detail both in characters and in the background. Also love the nice clean inks, cool shit!
The story is intriguing to say the least! It drops you right into the heat of action, you're good at storytelling man. So you gonna color all this man?

Awesole shit bro, keep it up!

Ross

yeah bro this is pretty damn cool

you coloring this and posting up the script right?

i also like how it is linked to sentinels

Incredible stuff, Renzo!!!

Part of me actually likes it in black and white but i am def going to color it . just give me some time. as for the story.
My friend kirk and i where going along these lines.

STORY
In the last page u see ships showing up. there will be a firefight.
alot of ships will be destroyed. some debri will collaspe against the Wendell Station causing minor problems.
alot of ships will leave knowing that they are outmanned.

meanwhile captain varivarn of wendell station finds out that the hull has been breached. he sends a small security unit. when the unit gets there they find an alien ship has broken into the hull. the ship is about the size of a small desk. they find out 3 entities must have come out and be inside. species is that of an insectoid.

guards are alerted. they start searching. a guard find one feeding on human remains. a firefight breaks out. soldiers are killed. 2 insectoid alies are killed. one escapes into the ducks or jefreys tube.

meanwhile in the med labs. Ashley and kiel are with the lil girl. they hear alarms but remain next to the child. Kiel beging to wonder if he should go to the bridge of the station. meanwhile the insectoid alien breaks in. doctors try to stop it. insectoid kills doctors and secutiry. it beging to head toward the child. thats when kiel tries to stop it . he doesnt have a blaster but uses some kind of medical tool and tries to drive it off. kiel gets thrown away and hurt. insectoid jumps on the bed. ashley makes a last effort to help the child. insectoid hurts her in some way. she collases on the floor.

At this point i was wondering weather the child should wake up , put her hands on the insectoid head and put him to sleep . surprising everyone around them or weather security charges into the room and blast the insectoid to bits helping the situation.
ill put this part to discusion.

so what you just posted is what is supposed to happen next right?

and it can be done in several pages or in collaborations?

if we want to we can chose to do a small part of what you described as well right?

I want you all to help me with the script and thats basically as far as i got it betwene kirk and I. you guys can basically do ur own words , ur own style and as many pages or pannels you want. just keep the story in mind. Reason i am doing it this way is because learning from the paradox comic we ended up coming to a halt a few too many times because of either story or artist. this way i belive it will work better.
also lets say someone comes out and says ill do pagees 6 to 8. and some else comes and says ill do pages 9 to 11 to this certain event. then as long as we know the story direction and design person doing pages 9 to 11 can have his pages done first while the other one will continue.
hopefully that doesnt get too confusing but will make it much easier for anyone to work on a page.